Jordan Hoff

 Jordan Hoff is the Black Hills Chapter 2006 1st place winner in the University Undergraduate division. He lives in Rapid City, South Dakota and is a junior at the South Dakota School of Mines and Technology, majoring in Mining Engineering. His parents are Greg and Julie Hoff and he has a younger brother, Justin. Some of his hobbies include photography and music. He says, "I learned about the essay contest through my parents and grandparents who are active in GRHS. It is always interesting to learn about your roots through the study of family history." Jordan has entered the youth essay contest three times and has won awards each time. Jordan worked this summer as a Mining Engineer Intern in Wyoming.

                                  Stalin’s Great Canal
     Michael Kessler was 19 years old this morning, but he was thinking of his 9th birthday. He remembered being in his family’s home back in the Ukraine, where his family had lived since his great grandparents had moved there from Germany. He had jumped out of bed and ran into the next room were his father was, already dressed for the day’s work in the fields. His father had asked him what he had wanted for his birthday, and he had answered that he wanted nothing more than to see the ice lakes of the north. Michael had heard about the great mountains, icy lakes, and infinite forests from his father’s workers. They were Russian, many being from the vast northern territories. They always said that where they were from was much more beautiful than the black sea area, where the Kessler’s had their farm.
     Now he was there in the northern territories, walking along the bank of the frozen lake Onega. With the snow falling lightly on the great pine trees just visible through the morning mist, and the ice a yellow-orange glow with the rising sun peeking over the far mountains to the east, he could have almost called it the most beautiful site he had ever seen. Almost.
     The site reminded him of the first time he had seen the harsh north. After the Russians came to take the Kessler’s farm away, then splitting up his family. Michael had gone northeast to work on the canal, and the rest of his family had been dispersed throughout Siberia to the west to work in the labor camps. That had been almost two years ago, when he was shoved into a box car, packed to the point of bursting with other prisoners. Even without that thought, Michael still believed that his family’s farm, nestled in the rolling hills and just a short walk from the Black Sea, was more beautiful. But he knew he would never see the farm again.
     He turned, and now instead of the lake he saw the back of the other prisoners in procession from the tent camps sprawling into the distance behind them. He saw them in their tattered coats and pants and once again became painfully aware of the holes in his jacket and razor thin socks and ragged shoes. They were going back to work, the building of a great canal in Joseph Stalin’s honor. There were some soldiers along the ridge with their rifles propped up on their shoulders looking bored. It would have been certain death for a prisoner to try to escape in the dead of winter. Here in the far north of Russia winter was cold, colder than anything Michael had ever known, and when the wind blew, it got colder.
     The procession made its way over the hill and the canal came into view. The 12 foot hole of frozen mud and splintering wood snaking into the distance did not look like a great honor to Michael. He walked past the crane that lowered the wooden logs into the canal to be used in construction. The foreman was yelling orders, but Michael could not hear him over the diesel engine. They ran the crane all night because that was the only way to keep it from freezing solid.
     The foreman then got into the crane and Michael heard the straining whine of metal as the crane started to turn, bringing a load of wooded logs into the canal. He started to climb down into the trench when something caught his foot and he fell, landing on his back on the bottom of the canal. The ground was so cold it felt like rock. He looked up to see what he had tripped on, and saw the body of a man. He climbed back up the trench to where this man was lying and saw that he must have died the day before; succumbing to the cold or starvation. Michael tried to roll him but he would not budge. He was frozen solid and stuck to the ground. Michael heard a man yelling in Russian and looked up to see a soldier glaring down at him. “Get back to work,” he said, and kicked him back into the canal.
     Michael landed on his back again, but this time he hit his head too. Dazed he looked up expecting to see white sky, however, the crane’s arm was over him now and the platform of logs blocked his view. The arm seemed to lurch to a sudden stop, struggling in the frost of the morning. The platform waved back and forth in the air. Michael did not hear the snap of the rope holding the logs, but he did see the platform as it rushed down to meet him.

                                        The White Sea Canal
     The White Sea Canal opened on August 2, 1933 joining the White Sea and the Baltic Sea together (1). It spans a total length of 141 miles partially running along numerous rivers and lakes, including Lake Onega (2). Stalin presented the canal as a great success and as an example of the might and efficiency of the Soviet Union, taking only 20 months to complete. The Soviets were so proud of the canal it was commemorated by monuments, plays, comedies, and songs of praise. There was even a brand of Soviet cigars named after the canal (1).
     Over 100,000 prisoners died during the White Sea Canal’s construction. These people included political prisoners, Germans, and other out of favor ethnic groups. The canal was constructed only 12 feet deep, making it virtually useless to most vessels. Even today very few, if any, ships travel through this passage. Other countries claimed that the canal was a complete failure, but Stalin rejected this, saying that he was very proud of this accomplishment (1)

Sources:
1. "White Sea-Baltic Canal." Wikipedia. 15 Feb. 2006. 26 Feb. 2006
     <http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/White_Sea-Baltic_Canal>. 

2. 
Gorky, M. L. Map of the White Sea-Baltic Canal. 26 Feb. 2006

     <http://www.iisg.nl/collections/belomorkanal/map.html>.

 

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